the blue and yellow at the background completes the picture... the face itself.. hmm.. the focus seems to be on the eyebrow rather than the eye.. its very difficult since its a very narrow depth of field..

great shot!! and does convey summer freshness...

very beautiful girl too!!

sort of an offbeat portrait, i like it. but i think that the color tones should be warmer.

Nice capture! Nice composition too!

Love it. Amazing colours. Perfect pose/expression. Love the background and framing/presentation. My only crit is that I think it's cropped a little too much at the bottom (oh, and better focus on the eye).

nice portrait but i don't like the weird selective blur
the eye is blurred but not the elbows, wich is weird imo
+7

like the colors, i agree with blackshad about the blur

Agree with blackshad.
Nice portrait ! +7/7

Composition great!!!

Just slightly better sharpness on the eye and it is a nice comp imo.

The crop and the focus are really good... I like the colors... Good Job here... Keep up...

Hugo Zenha

Nice shot! I like the composition

Nice portrait!....great mood!
I would like to see a little of her chin.
Carlos

great work... realy like the crop and the dof .... well done

Nice shot!

Excellent!

nice capture

Beautiful work Murat !!
Love the colors & DOF !! Agree with Carlos about the chin..
Atleast the lower lip should be 'in' ....
Top Marks !!

Good work

Lovely........

+10

Thank you all for your comments and suggestions...
Murat

Really like the composition - the off centred and clearly deliberate non-conventional cropping of the subject is very effective.
The use of a very restricted area of focus works well, maybe i'd like to see a little more of the pupil here (?) though i appreciate you want her gaze to be looking back over her shoulder, so maybe it wouldn't work any other way.
Normally I'd agree with defining the image from the border but with this compo being unconventional anyway it might be an option to remove the grey pencil line and let the white areas of the image blend into the white frame. Just a thought.
Very effective and dramatic background bokeh - nice piece.

Thank you Phill . I guess, you will like the second photo of this serie. The pupil completely bright. I tried and liked the white frame in this serie. Tnx 4 your suggestion. Murat

Nice one but I like second one more. +10
Mert

Checked out your 'Summer Brightness' pic which has the model looking to camera... my personal preference is still for this image though - i like the movement here it feels more spontaneous, and less static - and i like the extremes of colour in the background... of course comparing pictures like that isn't really valid - each has its own story to tell.

great shot ! like the composition and the prespective ! well done !
top mark !

erdi

fantastic.simple- nice colors

Beautiful photograph. The girl looks elegant and calm.
+10

Liked the DOF